Last month my daughter and I went to the 2008 ACFW Conference, and as part of that, I have re-written my first two chapters.
This was spurred on by a paid critique from Jeff Gerke, who helped me realize the need for:
- Less telling and more showing, and
- An “Indiana Jones” style entrance for my main character.
To read my first sample chapter in PDF format, click the following:
Also, please remember to sign up for my “book announcement e-mail list“, and get access to my second chapter.