Rewritten Chapters Available For Review

Last month my daughter and I went to the 2008 ACFW Conference, and as part of that, I have re-written my first two chapters.

This was spurred on by a paid critique from Jeff Gerke, who helped me realize the need for:

  • Less telling and more showing, and
  • An “Indiana Jones” style entrance for my main character.

To read my first sample chapter in PDF format, click the following:

>>> Merlin’s Blade Prologue <<<

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