{"id":6143,"date":"2009-03-25T21:08:26","date_gmt":"2009-03-26T02:08:26","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/2009\/03\/25\/how_i_improved_my_fiction\/"},"modified":"2009-03-25T21:08:26","modified_gmt":"2009-03-26T02:08:26","slug":"how_i_improved_my_fiction","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/2009\/03\/25\/how_i_improved_my_fiction\/","title":{"rendered":"How I Improved My Fiction"},"content":{"rendered":"

Since my single attempt at sending a proposal out ended in the expected result, I have decided to improve my fiction in three different ways:<\/p>\n

I Simplified The Names Of My Characters<\/h3>\n

My book is fraught with difficult names<\/strong>, but my most egregious choice was spelling Merlin and Arthur’s names different from the standard English: Merlyn and Arthwyr. Why did I spell them this way? Because these are one of the many variants of the old<\/em> ways of spelling them.<\/p>\n

I have now amended my ways. <\/em><\/p>\n

So now the first series will be known as “The Merlin Spiral<\/strong>“, Merlin will be Merlin, and Arthur will be Arthur. Most of the other names I am leaving alone, but will consider fixing them if requested by a publisher or an agent.<\/p>\n

Why change just these two names? Promotion<\/em>.<\/strong> Any publisher will have fixed dollars to spend on promotion, and there is little reason to confuse the public about the fact that I am writing an Arthurian set of novels.
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I Improved The Main Character’s Motivation<\/h3>\n

My first fifty pages are probably the worst of my entire novel. <\/strong>That’s a bad thing, considering that this is how agents, publishers, and readers will first judge the book. <\/p>\n

But don’t be confused. The novel picks up pace very fast. I am just laying the foundation for the novel. EVERY SCENE. Let. me. repeat. EVERY SCENE in the first fifty pages is necessary to the plot.<\/p>\n

So what was the problem then? Did my fiction writing THIRST™ methodology<\/a> fail?<\/strong> Did I not have enough Tension, Humor, Incident, Romance, Suspense, and Terror\/Fear in those pages?<\/p>\n

Actually I did. There was enough. What was missing was the letter “M”, which is “MOTIVATION”.<\/strong> My main character did not have a strong enough motivation to drive the novel’s beginning.<\/p>\n

Sure, there was an external purpose, but there was no internal one.<\/strong><\/p>\n

I have now amended my ways. <\/em><\/p>\n

NOW my main character has a driving, internal purpose for the first fifty pages<\/strong>. I don’t know why I hadn’t seen it earlier. It drastically changes the beginning of the novel, yet it changes very few words.<\/p>\n

And everything I had already written actually makes MORE sense.<\/strong><\/p>\n

So, my recommendation is<\/strong> to make sure your novel’s main character has an interesting internal AND and external purpose to start them off. And make their choices ruin everything and set up the rest of the book! <\/p>\n

Read more about this<\/a> from the master agent himself, Nathan Bransford<\/a><\/strong>. He started my brain thinking about my novel’s shortcomings. Thanks, Nathan!<\/p>\n

I Renamed My Books<\/h3>\n

My books are all named using inanimate objects.<\/strong> I realized that this was a lost opportunity. I should try to grab the emotions and interest of a reader\/agent\/publisher with titles that actually contained the names of the characters. <\/p>\n

In short, I have now amended my ways. <\/em><\/p>\n

So gone are the hammers, stones, shadows, eyes, and kingdoms. Here are the new titles. I’d like to hear what you think of them:<\/p>\n

The Merlin Spiral:<\/strong><\/p>\n