{"id":6023,"date":"2010-05-19T20:26:10","date_gmt":"2010-05-20T01:26:10","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/2010\/05\/19\/how-to-establish-your-writing-voice\/"},"modified":"2010-05-19T20:26:10","modified_gmt":"2010-05-20T01:26:10","slug":"how-to-establish-your-writing-voice","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/2010\/05\/19\/how-to-establish-your-writing-voice\/","title":{"rendered":"How To Establish Your Writing Voice"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><strong>Yesterday, a strange series of events happened<\/strong> &#8230; all in the perfect order to cause my daughter, <strong><a href=\"http:\/\/ness.epictales.org\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Ness<\/a> <\/strong> , to have quite a fright.<\/p>\n<p>First off, I was mowing the lawn, and promptly got the mower stuck in a muddy section near some woods. So I&#8217;m trolling the garage to find chains, anything, that I can use to pull it out using our van.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Meanwhile my son captures a black snake.<\/strong> Generally these are harmless, and in fact beneficial in that they eat the rodents skittering around the outside of our house&#8230; But this snake was in the corner garden, and it was huge&#8230; nearly four feet long.<\/p>\n<p><strong>And it was <em>pretending<\/em> to be a rattler<\/strong> , shaking its tail and striking out&#8230; So we put the thing in a bucket, stuck a make-shift lid on, stacked up four bricks to hold it inside, and went to pull the mower from the mud. Mind you, we&#8217;re planning on letting it go &#8230; away from the house.<\/p>\n<p>So, after hooking up the chains, my son climbs in the driver&#8217;s seat of our van, and I get on the mower.<\/p>\n<p><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"goright\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.EpicTales.org\/images\/Robert\/Snake.jpg?w=250\" alt=\"\"  \/><\/p>\n<p><strong>It was just at that wrong moment that Ness came out to see the snake<\/strong> &#8230; right when we were highly distracted.<\/p>\n<p><strong>So she did what any normal, brave, unattended nine-year-old would do<\/strong> &#8230; She took off the first brick&#8230; She took off the second brick.<\/p>\n<p>The third.<\/p>\n<p>The fourth.<\/p>\n<p>She took the lid off&#8230;<strong><em>and screamed!<\/em> <\/strong><\/p>\n<p>The snake rose up.<\/p>\n<p>Ness flew horizontally across the driveway, skinning her knee badly.<\/p>\n<p>You see, she thought it was a <em>small <\/em>snake.<\/p>\n<p><strong>So, after comforting her<\/strong> and helping her back inside,<strong> <a href=\"http:\/\/www.slygames.net\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Leighton<\/a> <\/strong>and I set off to get the snake out of the garage. Considering that our garage is a bit messy, this wasn&#8217;t easy, and I ended up having to grab the thing, catch its head before it could nip me, and carry it off to the woods.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Now you&#8217;re wondering <\/strong> what this has to do with establishing your writing voice. Well &#8230; catching that cold, muscular snake in the bowels of my garage was a bit like trying to catch a writing voice as an author.<\/p>\n<p>And who has the latest, greatest advice on this? &#8230; Why, <strong>Nathan Bransford<\/strong>, of course, the super-fast uber-agent<strong> <\/strong> who wrote <strong><a href=\"http:\/\/blog.nathanbransford.com\/2010\/05\/how-to-craft-great-voice.html\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">an excellent post on crafting a great voice<\/a>. <\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>The concept of an author&#8217;s &#8220;voice&#8221; is a difficult thing to grasp<\/strong> , and Nathan has caught it, snake-head and all. His main bullet points are as follows, but you&#8217;ll have to go read his article to find out what each of these mean:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Sensibility<\/li>\n<li>Style<\/li>\n<li>Personality<\/li>\n<li>Consistency<\/li>\n<li>Moderation<\/li>\n<li>Transportation<\/li>\n<li>Authority<\/li>\n<li>Originality<\/li>\n<li>Authenticity <\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Oh, and what kind of writing voice do I have? <\/strong> That&#8217;s a very good question!<\/p>\n<p>The only direct comparison anyone has given me is when Paige Pendleton over at Authonomy said my writing reminded her of<strong> <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Ken-Follett\/e\/B000APHCPQ\/ref=sr_ntt_srch_lnk_6?_encoding=UTF8&amp;qid=1274283253&amp;sr=8-6\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Ken Follet<\/a>, <\/strong>who is the best-selling UK author of <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Pillars-Earth-Ken-Follett\/dp\/0451166892\/ref=sr_1_3?ie=UTF8&amp;s=books&amp;qid=1274283253&amp;sr=8-3\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">The Pillars Of The Earth<\/a>, the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Eye-Needle-Ken-Follett\/dp\/006074815X\/ref=sr_1_7?ie=UTF8&amp;s=books&amp;qid=1274283253&amp;sr=8-7\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Eye Of The Needle<\/a>, and many, many more. I&#8217;ve never read Mr. Follet, but after looking into his work, I consider this comparison quite a compliment.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Here is Paige&#8217;s quote about MERLIN&#8217;S BLADE:<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><\/strong><\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p>I get it.<br \/>I buy it.<br \/>I love it.<\/p>\n<p>Smoking story, Robert. This will certainly be going places. You wield it all masterfully. Ken Follet kept popping to mind as I read this. It is rich in imagery and detail, and yet, very tight and clean. I want to finish what is here, but backed with serious admiration and respect.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>I still have a whole lot to learn, so all I can say to that is:<strong> <em>Wow&#8230; Thanks!<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong><\/strong><\/p>\n<hr \/>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/epictales.org\/HammerAndStone.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"goright\" title=\"Merlin's Blade, published by Zondervan\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/media.zondervan.com\/images\/product\/original\/9780310735076.JPG?w=90\" alt=\"Merlin's Blade, published by Zondervan\"  \/><\/a><strong><em>Robert Treskillard is the author of <a href=\"http:\/\/epictales.org\/HammerAndStone.htm\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">MERLIN&#8217;S BLADE<\/a>, book 1 of The Merlin Spiral, which will be released internationally by Zondervan in February 2013.<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Views: 47<\/p>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<div class=\"entry-summary\">\nYesterday, a strange series of events happened &#8230; all in the perfect order to cause my daughter, Ness , to&hellip;\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/2010\/05\/19\/how-to-establish-your-writing-voice\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &ldquo;How To Establish Your Writing Voice&rdquo;<\/span>&hellip;<\/a><\/div>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":6024,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[46,51,8,76,28],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-6023","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-agents","category-editing-fiction","category-family","category-nathan-bransford","category-on-writing-fiction","entry"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/05\/Snake.jpg?fit=542%2C496","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p67v0M-1z9","_links":{"self":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6023","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6023"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6023\/revisions"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/6024"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6023"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=6023"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"http:\/\/www.epictales.org\/treskillard\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=6023"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}